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Quiz Ganges

Quiz 3 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:

We noticed the presence of the burning ghats, where various corpses were being cremated.
Answer: 
We noticed the burning ghats, where corpses were being cremated.
[ clarity ]

"Help them," screamed King Sagara.
Answer: 
"Help them!" screamed King Sagara.
[ punctuation ]

After the worker stacked the sandalwood in a criss-cross pattern, it was paid for by us.
Answer: 
After the worker stacked the sandalwood in a criss-cross pattern, we paid for it.
[ grammar ]

The resting stork stood perfectly still on its long thin legs.
{ replace with a metaphor }
Suggested Answer: 
The resting stork was a statue on stilts.
( or maybe: ...was a feather pillow on a pole.)
[ style ( metaphor ) ]

The fires on the burning ghats were fueled with the aid of sandalwood for the rich and by means of neem wood for the poor.
Answer: 
The fires on the burning ghats were fueled with sandalwood for the rich and by neem wood for the poor.
[ clarity ]

Ganga came down from heaven! She followed the king east! They purified the ashes at the Bay of Bengal!
Answer: 
Ganga came down from heaven and followed the king east. They purified the ashes at the Bay of Bengal.
[ punctuation ]

More than any river, the Ganges is considered a source of salvation.
Answer: 
More than any other river, the Ganges is considered a source of salvation.
[ grammar ]

The uninterested peace officer listened carefully to separate accounts of how the boat ran aground.
Answer: 
The disinterested peace officer listened carefully to separate accounts of how the boat ran aground.
[ words ]

Kamala naively expected the birds were quiet.
Answer: 
Kamala naively expected the birds would be quiet.
[ style ( idiom ) ]

Irregardless of the consequences, Arjun sailed north at high tide.
Answer: 
Regardless of the consequences, Arjun sailed north at high tide.
[ words ]

 

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