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Quiz Congo

Quiz 3 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:

It is natural to associate the Congo river and the Kongo tribe.
Answer: 
It is natural to associate the Congo river with the Kongo tribe.
[ style (idiom) ]

The careful pharmacist will peruse the prescription before filling it.
Answer: 
The careful pharmacist will peruse the prescription before filling it.
[ words - correct as is ]

Black tributaries are combined with red streams to form the brown Congo. { use active voice }
Answer: 
Black tributaries combine with red streams to form the brown Congo.
[ clarity ( active voice ) ]

You and them ought to go swimming.
Answer: 
You and they ought to go swimming.
[ grammar ]

Katokwe wanted to ensure herself for long-term disability.
Answer: 
Katokwe wanted to insure herself for long-term disability.
[ words ]

After a week on the river they were ready for: warm showers, dry beds, and a roof over their heads.
Answer: 
After a week on the river they were ready for warm showers, dry beds, and a roof over their heads.
[ punctuation ]

The rapids of the Congo, which are really no big deal, represent the largest reserve of water power in the world.
Suggested Answer: 
The rapids of the Congo represent the largest reserve of water power in the world.
[ style ]

We caught five fish, but only kept two for food purposes.
Answer: 
We caught five fish, but only kept two for food.
[ clarity ]

Panga heard my whistling at the birds.
Answer: 
Panga heard me whistling at the birds.
[ grammar ]

Babatunde made many new friends on the Congo, that is: he sang to the animals.
Answer: 
Babatunde made many new friends on the Congo: that is, he sang to the animals.
[ punctuation ]

 

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